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Write the MOST EFFECTIVE Concessions Paragraphs for Argument, Synthesis, & Research Essays
Garden of English
Overview
This video explains how to effectively write concession paragraphs in argumentative, synthesis, and research essays. It emphasizes that a concession involves admitting a valid point from an opposing viewpoint, not fully agreeing with it. The presenter provides a step-by-step guide using a model essay based on a past AP Language synthesis prompt about educational technology. Key strategies include structuring the thesis to signal a concession, using specific concessionary language in topic sentences, and carefully transitioning back to the writer's main argument by highlighting the limitations of the conceded point. The goal is to demonstrate a nuanced understanding of the topic and strengthen the writer's own position.
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Chapters
- Sophisticated essays acknowledge and respond to other perspectives, known as counterarguments.
- There are three ways to address counterarguments: concede, rebut, or refute.
- A concession means admitting that an opposing viewpoint has some validity or truth to an extent.
- Concessions demonstrate empathy and an understanding of the topic's complexity, but they are challenging to write effectively.
Acknowledging opposing viewpoints, especially through concessions, makes your own argument more persuasive and shows you've considered the issue from multiple angles.
Admitting that while technology can increase accessibility, it might also negatively impact students with short attention spans.
- A thesis statement can be structured to signal that a concession will follow.
- Using subordinating conjunctions like 'while,' 'although,' or 'even though' at the beginning of the thesis creates a dependent clause for the concession.
- This structure makes the conceded point appear less significant than the writer's main claim.
- Qualify the conceded point using phrases like 'have the potential' while using stronger, more absolute terms for your own argument.
A well-structured thesis sets up the reader's expectations and strategically positions your main argument as the primary focus, even while acknowledging other views.
Ali's thesis: 'While computers and other information Technologies may have the potential to be extremely useful... School administrators must consider the negative effect...'
- Begin the concession paragraph with a topic sentence that clearly signals an admission of a point from the opposing side.
- Present evidence and reasoning to support the conceded point, demonstrating genuine understanding.
- Crucially, use transition words like 'however' or phrases like 'even though' to pivot back to your own argument and highlight the limitations of the conceded point.
- The paragraph should end by reinforcing your main argument or setting up the next point that supports it, rather than contradicting your thesis.
This structure ensures that you don't undermine your own argument; instead, you use the concession to highlight why your perspective is ultimately more valid or comprehensive.
After admitting technology increases accessibility, using 'however' to discuss its negative effects on attention spans and face-to-face interaction.
- Specific concessionary language can be used in topic sentences (e.g., 'It's easy to admit,' 'One cannot deny').
- Transitional phrases within the commentary (e.g., 'however,' 'even though') are vital for shifting focus back to your argument.
- Practice is essential for mastering the skill of writing effective concession paragraphs.
- Resources like textbooks and study apps can provide further guidance and examples.
Utilizing precise language and practicing regularly will help you integrate concessions smoothly and effectively, enhancing the sophistication of your writing.
Using phrases like 'It's easy for just about anyone to admit' in a topic sentence to introduce a conceded point.
Key takeaways
- Concessions strengthen arguments by showing you understand and have considered opposing viewpoints.
- A concession acknowledges partial validity in an opposing argument, not full agreement.
- Structure your thesis with subordinating conjunctions to signal and downplay the conceded point.
- Use clear concessionary language in topic sentences to introduce the admitted point.
- Employ transition words like 'however' to pivot from the concession back to your main argument, highlighting its limitations.
- The goal of a concession paragraph is to enhance your own argument, not to contradict it.
- Effective concessions demonstrate nuanced thinking and a sophisticated understanding of complex issues.
Key terms
CounterargumentConcessionRebuttalRefutationThesis StatementDependent ClauseSubordinating ConjunctionTopic SentenceNuanceSophistication
Test your understanding
- What is the primary purpose of including a concession in an argumentative essay?
- How can a writer structure their thesis statement to effectively introduce a concession?
- What is the difference between a concession and a full agreement with an opposing viewpoint?
- Why is it important to use transitional phrases like 'however' after making a concession?
- How does a concession paragraph contribute to the overall persuasiveness of an essay?